热点08.发言稿 读后续写 概要写作(解析版)-2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)7页

优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点08.发言稿+读后续写+概要写作1.假定你是李华，你将去参加青少年环保交流大会，请就你校校园垃圾分类情况拟定英文发言稿，内容包括：1.取得的成果；2.存在的不足；3.改进的措施。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearfriends,I’mLiHua,fromHongxingHighSchool.Ifeelhonoredtotalkaboutgarbagesortinginmyschool.Thanksforyourlistening.【参考范文】Dearfriends,I’mLiHua,fromHongxingHighSchool.Ifeelhonoredtotalkaboutgarbagesortinginmyschool.Wehavemadegreatprogress.Studentscansorttheirgarbagecorrectly.Moreimportantly,theycreatelessgarbageoncampusandraisetheawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.However,problemsalsoarise.Somestudentstaketheirgarbageoutofcampus,wheretheydon’thavetosort.Todealwithit,weshouldbedevotedtoputtingmoreemphasisontheimportanceofgarbagesorting.Informingthemofmoreknowledgeaboutitisnecessaryaswell.,优点英语It’shightimeforstudentstoformthehabitofsortinggarbage.Thanksforyourlistening.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇在青少年环保交流大会上的发言稿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：简洁概括式。发言稿应力求简洁，概括要点不拖沓。要求：内容包括：1.取得的成果；2.存在的不足；3.改进的措施。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）makegreatprogress,sortgarbagecorrectly,raisetheawarenessofdoingsth.,protecttheenvironment,dealwith,bedevotedtodoingsth.,putmoreemphasisonsth.,theimportanceofsth.,formthehabitofdoingsth.第三步：连词成句Wehavemadegreatprogress.Studentscansorttheirgarbagecorrectly.Theycreatelessgarbageoncampusandraisetheawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.Weshouldbedevotedtoputtingmoreemphasisontheimportanceofgarbagesorting.It’shightimeforstudentstoformthehabitofsortinggarbage.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题，确保句式简洁。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Moreimportantly.2.表转折对比关系：However.4.表目的关系：不定式作目的状语。5.表强烈建议：It’shightimeforsb.todosth.连句成文，使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，注意句式的多样性。,优点英语【范文点评】[高分句型1]Somestudentstaketheirgarbageoutofcampus,wheretheydon’thavetosort.该句中where引导非限制性定语从句，修饰garbage。[高分句型2]Todealwithit,weshouldbedevotedtoputtingmoreemphasisontheimportanceofgarbagesorting.该句中用动词不定时作目的状语，主句中用了bedevotedtodoingsth.和putmoreemphasisonsth.两个短语，语言地道，句式简洁。2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。AfternoonwasMrs.Green'sfavoritetimeofday.Afteraharddayatwork,hereyesweretiredandherfeethurt.Sheusuallyenjoyedthenicelongsleepwhenshewasonthebus.Mrs.Greenhadmadefriendswiththebusdriver,Mr.Smith.Healwayswokeherupbeforeherstop.Sheusuallyfeltfreshagainwhenshegotoffthebus.Buttodaywasdifferent.Mr.Smithwasn'tdriving.Asmallmansatinthedriver’sseat."Where'sMr.Smith?"askedMrs.Green,droppinghermoneyintothebox."Idon’tknow.Sick,Iguess.Ijustworkhere,lady."Mrs.GreenhopedthatMr.Smithwasallright.Shedidn'tlikethisnewdriver.Shedecidednottosleeponthewayhometoday.Shedidn'twanttoaskthisdrivertowakeher.Mrs.Greenlookedoutofthewindow.Itwasawarmafternoon.Thoughshetriedhardtostayawake,thegentlerockingofthebusmadeherfallasleepsoon.ThenMrs.Greenfeltsomeoneshakingher."Wakeup,lady.We’vecometotheendoftheline."Mrs.Greenslowlyopenedhereyes.Thebusdriverlookeddownather,"Isaid,thisistheendoftheline,lady.It'stimetogetoff."Mrs.Greenlookedoutofthewindow."WhereamI?"sheasked."IwassupposedtogetoffatBrightenAvenue.""Youareatthelaststop,lady.Comeon,getoffthebus."Mrs.Greenhadtroublewakingup.Whenthebusdrivertookherarmandhelpedherstepoffthebus,shefeltasenseofpanic."Waitaminute,"shescreamed."Thisisn'tBrightenAvenue.WhereamI?HowcanIgethome?""Cooloff,lady.Youareattheendoftheline.Youhavetogetoffhere."Butwhycan'tIridebackwithyou?"shebegged."Ihavethefare!""Sorry,lady,"hesaidasheclosedthedoor.It'sagainsttherules.Youhavemissedthestop,andIcan'ttakeyoubackagain."注意:,优点英语1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mrs.Greenwatchedthebusdisappeardowntheroad.Suddenlytheafternoonsunseemedsurprisinglybright.【参考范文】Mrs.Greenwatchedthebusdisappeardowntheroad.Shelookedandwalkedaround,tryingtofigureoutwhatpartofthecityshewasin.Therewerenostoresaround,nostreetsigns,andnotaxis.Fewpeoplecouldbeseenatthislonelystop.Itseemedthecitywasmilesaway.Shecouldn'thelpcomplaining."Howrudethenewdriveris!"shethought."Althoughitistheendoftheline,whycan'tIrideback?Isitaone-wayride?"Itseemedshecouldnotfindthewayhome.Suddenlytheafternoonsunseemedsurprisinglybright.Thesmalldriverdrovehiscarandpulledup.Hegotoutofhiscar,smiledandcameuptoher,sayingitwastimeforhertogo.Shecouldn'tunderstandandstillcomplainedaboutthedriverandtheunreasonablerules,sayingthatshewasjusthavingasleepandthenmissedBrightenAvenue.Butthedriverexplainedpatientlythatthosewerethecompany'srulesandhecouldn'tbreakthem,andthat,优点英语waswhyhecameagaintosendherhome.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了格林夫人总是会在回家的公交车上睡一觉，司机史密斯先生也总是会在她到站的时候叫醒她。结果这天来了一个新司机，格林夫人没有要求对方叫醒自己，于是坐过了站，想让司机送自己回去，结果对方拒绝了，说不能违反规定。格林夫人下了车似乎找不到回家的路，结果司机把车又开了回来，说公司的规定，他不能违反，所以他又返回来，送她回家了。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“格林夫人看着公共汽车消失在公路的尽头。”可知，第一段可描写格林夫人下了车之后的感受，她来到了一个陌生的地方，似乎找不到回家的路。②由第二段首句内容“突然，下午的阳光似乎出奇地明媚。”可知，第二段可描写司机最后是如何又返回来，说要送格林夫人回家的。2.续写线索：格林夫人下车——格林夫人抱怨——格林夫人找不到路——新司机下车——新司机解释——新司机送格林夫人回家3.词汇激活行为类：说话：complain/say/explainedpatiently/saywithpatience；回家：findthewayhome/returnhome情绪类：不满：rude/unreasonable/impolite；孤独：lonely/byoneself【范文点评】[高分句型1]Althoughitistheendoftheline,whycan'tIrideback?运用although引导让步状语从句。[高分句型2]Shecouldn'tunderstandandstillcomplainedaboutthedriverandtheunreasonablerules,sayingthatshewasjusthavingasleepandthenmissedBrightenAvenue.运用现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句。3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。DietCoke,dietPepsi,dietpills,no-fatdiet,vegetabledict...Wearesurroundedbytheword"diet"everywherewelookandlisten.Wehavesoeasilybeenattractedbythepromiseandpotentialofdietproductsthatwehavestoppedthinkingaboutwhatdietproductsaredoingtous.Wearepayingforproductsthatharmuspsychologicallyandphysically.Dietproductssignificantlyweakenuspsychologically.Ononelevel,influencedbydietproducts,peopletendtowatchtheirweightratherthantheirdiet.DietproductsmakeusJumpoverthethinkingstageandgostraightforthescale(秤）instead.Allwehavetodoistorecognizetheword"diet"infoodlabelsinthesupermarket.Onanotherlevel,dietproductsmakepeoplebelievethatgaincomeswithoutpain,andthatlifecanbewithoutresistanceand,优点英语struggle.Forexample,everytimewehaveazero-caloriedrink,wearetellingourselveswithoutourawarenessthatwedon'thavetoworktogetresults.Thedangerofdietproductsliesnotonlyinthepsychologicaleffectstheyhaveonus,butalsointhephysicalharmthattheycause.Dietfoodscanindirectlyharmourbodiesbecauseconsumingtheminsteadofhealthyfoodsmeanswearepreventingourbodiesfromhavingbasicnutrients.Dietfoodsanddietpillscontainzerocalorieonlybecausethedietindustryhascreatedchemicalstoproducethesewonderproducts.Dietproductsmaynotbenutritional,andthechemicalthatgointodietproductsarepotentiallydangerous.Nowthatweareawareoftheeffectsthatdietproductshaveonus,itistimetoseriouslythinkaboutbuyingthem.Losingweightliesinthepowerofminds,notinthepowerofchemicals.Oncewerealizethis,wewillbemuchbetterabletoresistdietproducts,andthereforepreventthepotentialharmthatcomesfromusingthem.【参考范文】Nowadaysweareobsessedwithdietproducts,whichturnoutbothphysicallyandpsychologicallyharmful(要点1).First,wearetemptedintopayingmoreattentiontoourphysicalweightthaneatinghabits(要点2).Peoplealsotendtobelievelosingweightiseffortless,thuscausingpsychologicalharm(要点3).Second,dietproductsbringaboutphysicalharm,forwhattheycontainarenotnutrientsbutpotentiallydangerouschemicals(要点4).Accordingly,weshouldthinktwicebeforepurchasingdietproductsandtrytosaygoodbyetothem(要点5).【解析】这是一篇概要写作。讲述了目前人们对节食产品依赖的现象并指出节食产品对人们的身心健康都有危害，应该抵制节食产品。文章第一段为总起句，“DietCoke,dietPepsi,dietpills,no-fatdiet,vegetabledict...Wearesurroundedbytheword"diet"everywherewelookandlisten.Wehavesoeasilybeenattractedbythepromiseandpotentialofdietproductsthatwehavestoppedthinkingaboutwhatdietproductsaredoingtous.,优点英语”讲述了现在人们对节食产品的依赖，“Wearepayingforproductsthatharmuspsychologicallyandphysically.”点出节食产品对我们的身心都有伤害。所以第一段的概括为“现在我们对节食产品很依赖，这种产品对我们身心都有伤害。”，即“Nowadaysweareobsessedwithdietproducts,whichturnoutbothphysicallyandpsychologicallyharmful”。第二段和第三段分别讲述节食产品对心理的坏处和对身体的坏处。第二段从两方面论述节食产品对心理的坏处，第一方面是“Ononelevel,influencedbydietproducts,peopletendtowatchtheirweightratherthantheirdiet.DietproductsmakeusJumpoverthethinkingstageandgostraightforthescale(秤）instead.Allwehavetodoistorecognizetheword"diet"infoodlabelsinthesupermarket.”，讲述了人们更关注体重而不是自己的饮食习惯，第二方面是“Onanotherlevel,dietproductsmakepeoplebelievethatgaincomeswithoutpain,andthatlifecanbewithoutresistanceandstruggle.Forexample,everytimewehaveazero-caloriedrink,wearetellingourselveswithoutourawarenessthatwedon'thavetoworktogetresults.”，讲述了人们认为减肥不用付出努力，节食产品从这两方面对我们的心理造成伤害，所以第二段的主旨大意为“First,wearetemptedintopayingmoreattentiontoourphysicalweightthaneatinghabits.Peoplealsotendtobelievelosingweightiseffortless,thuscausingpsychologicalharm.”。第三段“Dietproductsmaynotbenutritional,andthechemicalthatgointodietproductsarepotentiallydangerous.”讲述了是因为节食产品可能没有营养，并且其中的化学成分可能有害，所以会对我们的身体造成伤害，所以第三段主旨大意为“Second,dietproductsbringaboutphysicalharm,forwhattheycontainarenotnutrientsbutpotentiallydangerouschemicals.”。最后一段号召我们戒掉节食产品，故主旨大意为“Accordingly,weshouldthinktwicebeforepurchasingdietproductsandtrytosaygoodbyetothem.”